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:iconleoleonardo:
A neat idea, and I like how the emote tears a hole in the background and jumps in. It's also very nicely animated.

However, I'm a bit confused as to what really happens when the emote pops out of the tube. Is that the insides of the internet? And why does he pull a light-switch-cord to make it loop? :lol:

Personally, I think you should loop it in a different way, like perhaps with some kind of exit-tube as well, or something. The way it is right now, it feels like the end was rushed to me. :noes:

Other than that, though, it's fine ;)
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:iconmeninasuitcase:
thank you for the critic, i did the loop like that because i wanted to mean that the emoticon is tired after a day of work and turn of the light off to go to sleep. :)
and yes i tried to make look where he live like it is inside the internet x3

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Leo great critique I also thinking that the end should be difrent

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Thanks :)

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